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Wednesday, June 21, 2017

Humungous Whales!

This week Room 12 watched an amazing video of a whale swimming beside a boat! 

We wrote stories pretending that we were on the boat. We thought we would feel awestruck!

This is the video we watched Video of Whale



Have a look at our amazing writing! 

I was going fishing. I saw a humungous whale. The whale was following the boat. It was white like a cloud. The whale was blue like the sky. The whale was doing a flip. The whale was happy. It was humungous. I felt over the moon. The whale was splashing.
By Tewila


I was happy. I liked it. My family was so happy too. My sister and me and my brother were happy. The whale was blue.
By Sarah


The sun was glistening on the water like crystals. The boat was wobbling like there was an earthquake. Then I saw a slimy, grey back. It was a gigantic, blue whale. It jumped. Its tail was the size of three yellow buses. I was awestruck. “Now that’s incredible.”
By Shaan


The sun was glistening on the water like diamonds. I was awestruck. It was the biggest whale in the whole world. It was incredible. The whale was blue and white.
By Shiv

I went with my family to see a humungous whale. The water looks like a spa. The waves are moving and the colour is light blue. The whale is bigger than the boat. His tail is big too.
By Cornellius


The sun was glistening on the water like diamonds. The water looked like blue sky. The people were awestruck because the whale was humungous. The people had not seen a whale in their life.
By Prisha


We went to the beach. We saw a boat. We went to get the map. We got into the boat. We saw a whale. The whale was humungous. I was awestruck because I had never seen one before.
By Rheeya


I was getting on the boat. I went into the deeper water. Then I saw a whale. I was awestruck to see the whale. Then I saw a whole family of whales. They were as pink as a pig.
By Ailey


A shadow appeared under the water… and then a blue whale that was gigantic like the titanic. I was so awestruck because I have never seen a blue whale before. I felt over the moon. The whale was blue and white. When the blue whale passed, it made little waves go past. The whale spat water at me.
By Samuel



One day I went with my dad. We went fishing for a whale.
By Hunter


The sun was shining in my eyes. The humungous whale was going in the water. They were nervous. It got dark and then white. It was blue like the water. I could not see it. I have never seen one so big and humungous.
By Carson


The sun was glistening like a diamond. The whale was humungous and is greay but it is cool. I was awestruck. My mum liked the humungous whale.
By Nitika


The sun was glistening on the water like diamonds. The boat went up and down. I was on the boat and I saw a humungous whale beside the boat. The colour of the whale. The whale was diving. The humungous whale was the biggest whale in the whole world. The whale was bigger than the boat. The boat was going towards the humungous whale. It was incredible because he could blow up water.
By Tauheed


I went on the boat and I saw a humungous whale. I said, “hi!” I was awestruck. My mum and dad and my brother were awestruck and the fishing man was not awestruck. The boat was wobbling like an earthquake.
By Envee


The sun was glistening on the water. The water was blue and the sun made the water sparkly. The whale went down in the water. I had fun looking at the whale. I liked the whale. It was fun.
By Joeleen


I saw a humungous blue whale. It was as blue as the sea. It splashed a humungous splash of water. We were soaking wet. We quickly dried off. We went back again. Then we went fishing and we saw it again. It got bigger everyday.
By Angel


I saw a whale. It was humungous and big. I liked it and we were surprised. The whale was blue. We were wet because the whale was big.
By Manaia


The sun was glistening in the water like diamonds in the sea. I like whales and the whale was small like an egg.
By Nevaeh


The sun was glistening on the water like diamonds. The blue whale was gigantic. It was as big as a war boat. It’s tail was the size of three yellow buses. The whale’s colour was blue.

By Aarav

1 comment:

  1. What great writing Room 12, you've used some great smilies.
    I look forward to reading more of your writing.

    Miss Yirrell

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